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2017年10月28日托福考试写作范文

来源:转载时间:2017-11-03

   2017年10月28日托福考试已经完成,育路教育为大家带来本次托福考试独立写作真题的范文,各位考生们可以作为参考。

  独立写作

  Many filmmakers made movie based on books. When a movie is produced based on books, some people prefer to read books before watching films, other people choose to watch movie first. What do you think?

  Sample Answer:

  Nowadays, movies adopted from novels become much more popular than before. Thus leads to a hot discussion on the question that which one should we do first: reading the original novel or watching the movie? (背景引入)Some folks propose that it is better to watch the movie first before we read the original story. (他人观点)However, when it comes to me, I prefer to enjoy the book first and then go to the movie. (我的观点)My view point is based on the following reasons and examples. (过渡句)

  To begin with, the original novel contains large amounts of detailed description and information which the film may have no ability to express as comprehensive as words. (分论点一)In most cases, the author can spill lots of ink over the description of sceneries and buildings in his fiction. Unfortunately, in the movie, these splendid depiction of the background might be concentrated into one shot and slides away in a moment. (展开句)For example, in the Harry Potter series, J. K. Rowling used several paragraphs to deliver gorgeous pictures of the dining hall in Hogwarts. When I was reading through the chapter in which Harry first went to his magic school, her vivid descriptions of those glass lamps, wood counters and roast chicken on sliver plates cast deep impression on me. Nevertheless, although the movie was also successful, due to the time limit, it was indeed very difficult to give enough shots to fully demonstrate these delicate furniture or ornaments. Without reading the original text, it is almost out of the question that audience will have a specific understanding of the dining hall’s charming appearance.(具体细节例证)

  Moreover, reading books can help us improve our ability of imagination, while movies can’t. (分论点二)During the process of reading fictions, individuals, especially little kids, can develop their capacity of visualizing the descriptions into mental presentation. Such kind of exercise has profound positive influence on their future cognitive competence. In contrast, watching movies first will damage this visualization process.(展开句)Researchers once set up an experiment to compare the difference between the impact of pictorial media and words on children’s future development. The conclusion was astonishing. Kids owning lower reading frequency performed much worse in the imagination test than those who got plenty of linguistic stimulations. It was uncovered that words and sentences were essential to children’s cultivation of imagination.(具体细节例证)

  Admittedly, watching movies first also has some significant advantages. (让步,承认对立观点好处)For kids who are too young to read complicated lines, films can serve as assistants when children want to capture the major plots, themes and figures in a masterpiece. (展开句)Take Jane Eyre as an example. My mother gave this famous book to me when I was only a primary school student. To be honest, I was so young that it was a tough task for me to obtain the contents of this complicated story – it contained too much abstract description of Jane Eyre’s internal struggle. I found it hard to comprehend her reflections on self-esteem, love and future. Until I saw the corresponding movie one day, I finally made it clear that this story was about a woman who pursued a life with pride and affection. In addition, this film made it easier for me to finish its’ original novel. So movies can sometimes be necessary for people to have a better understanding of its’ initial story.(具体细节例证)

  To sum up, it is highly recommended that original fictions should be read before people watching movies adopted from them. (重申第一段立场)Such reading process can not only offer us ample details which might be ignored by the film-maker, but also help us attain ample language input and cultivate our comprehensive ability. (重申第一二分论点)Whereas, it is also important for us to recognize that sometimes films can also make it easier for us to get the points from abstract words in a novel, which will help eliminate certain barriers laying in our reading process. (重申让步段分论点)

  以上就是育路教育为大家准备的2017年10月28日托福考试写作范文,考生们可以多多总结其中的经典语句与精彩结构。

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