雅思真题：2017年10月28日写作真题回顾

 　 育路教育为大家带来2017年10月28日雅思真题写作部分，各位考生可以针对往期题型进行模拟训练。　

       2017年10月28日 雅思写作范文解析

　　小作文 类型：柱图

　　题目

　　The chart below shows the percentages of household in one country that had various goods in then years 2001 and 2008.

　　Summarizing the information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparisons where relevant.

　　Household having various goods 2001 and 2008

　　表格说的是dishwsher washing machine, tumble dryer, home computer, satellite or cable TV, CD players, microwave oven, mobile phone and home telephone 的比例变化。

　　范文解析

　　解析：本题为多柱图。由于商品类别比较多，且涉及到两年的数据，因此柱子的数目比较多。考生在处理这类考题时，需要突出重点信息，例如最高和最低的柱子，以及各部分数值变化的相似特征;以便在有限的篇幅和时间达到考点。切忌过多或者详细描述各个品项的排名。

　　高分表达点

　　compares the percentage of

　　比较…的比例

　　In general, it is noticeable that…

　　总的来说，很明显的是…

　　Similarly, the significant rise was also seen in the rate of

　　类似的，…也有明显的增长

　　On the contrary

　　相反的

　　gain less popularity

　　受欢迎程度(比例)下降

　　time frame

　　时间段

　　Overall, it is interesting to note that…

　　总之，有趣的是

　　lost people’s favor

　　失去人们的喜爱(比例下降)

　　prevalence

　　流行

　　范文

　　The bar chart compares the percentage of diverse commodities owned by households in a certain country in the years 2001 and 2008.

　　In general, it is noticeable that in both years, washing machine was so welcomed that the figure for it was the highest with 98% and 100% respectively; while, the least proportion of families had dish washer, at only 30% and 40% separately.

　　Regarding to other items, it is not hard to find that their possession rate experienced an increase during this period, especially cable TV whose percent almost doubled from 43% to 82%. Similarly, the significant rise was also seen in the rate of home computer and mobile phone, climbing by approximately 15%.On the contrary, tumble dryer, CD player and microwave oven gained less popularity in the same time frame as their rate grew slightly by 5%.

　　Overall, it is interesting to note that despite the home telephone which lost people’s favor, other appliance as well as mobile phone enjoy risingprevalence over these seven years.

　　字数 167 words

　　大作文 类型：社会类

　　题目

　　Today, people in many countries choose to work and live wherever they like thanks to communication technology and transport. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

　　范文解析

　　本题探讨了自由选择工作场所和居住地方的利弊。考生在拓展论点的步骤中应该不会存在疑惑或者阻碍，因为该话题比较日常。此外，词汇上也有比较多的发挥余地。总体来说，这道题目的难度系数并不大。

　　文章结构

　　paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。

　　paragraph 2: 论述自由选择工作场所的优势。(分为在家办公和旅行办公两个层面)

　　paragraph 3: 论述自由选择住所的好处。(分为住在国内和国外两个层面)

　　paragraph 4: 总结上文论点，通过让步承认缺点，强调自己的观点。

　　高分表达点

　　owing to

　　归功于…

　　the advance of

　　…的发展

　　be granted chances to

　　被赋予…的机会

　　relieve from daily commutes

　　从日常上下班中解放出来

　　traffic congestion

　　交通阻塞

　　rush hours

　　高峰期

　　working schedule

　　工作日程

　　homeworker

　　在家工作的人

　　attend fitness class

　　参加健身课程

　　be subjected to

　　受到，经受…

　　spark inspiration and creativity

　　激发灵感和创造性

　　historical relics

　　历史遗迹

　　humanistic environment

　　人文环境

　　mountainous areas

　　山区

　　coastal city

　　沿海城市

　　refreshing and enlightening

　　使人耳目一新的有启发作用的

　　not to mention

　　更不用说

　　elevate skills

　　提高技能

　　feel isolated from the society

　　感觉和社会脱节

　　change dwellings

　　变换住所

　　boost working efficiency

　　提高工作效率

　　enrich people’s life experience

　　丰富个人经历

　　高分结构(范文中已用蓝色标注)

　　As far as I am concerned, this tendency does lead to several desirable results.

　　在我看来，这个趋势产生了一些令人满意的结果

　　Without…，hardly can…

　　没有…的话，…是不行的

　　although there is a concern that

　　尽管有…的

　　范文

　　Owing to the convenience of modern means of transportation and the advance ofcommunication technology, a growing number of people are granted chances tochoose their ideal workplaces and residence. As far as I am concerned, this tendency does lead to several desirable results.

　　The most obvious is that employees can be relieved from daily commutes. The long-distance communication as well as the internet technology provides conditions for staff to work at home, in which case, there is no need to spend hours on the way to offices, and suffer from the traffic congestion in rush hours. Additionally, a flexible working schedule maintains the balance between career and life. Instead of sitting in a certain room, dealing with assignment for fixed time frame, homeworkers can do exercise or attend fitness class in the morning; contact with clients and complete plans for projects in the afternoon. Obviously, under such a circumstance, it is less likely for them tobe subjected to huge stress from work, but increase their general satisfaction with life. Furthermore, this working pattern sparks inspiration and creativityespecially for writers and designers. Without being immersed in the wonder of nature or deeply appreciating the glamour of historical relics, hardly canthey create masterpieces.

　　Undeniably, residing places people prefer to generate some merits and the first one is to experience diverse landscapes and appealing humanistic environment of other regions. Imagine that how exciting for people frommountainous areas living in a coastal city. Besides, artistic projects such as sculptures, public art and lifestyles of local people enable newcomers to experience something refreshing and enlightening. Not to mention those who live abroad, their foreign language skills can be elevated and horizons of culture can be broadened.

　　In conclusion, although there is a concern that people may feel isolated from the society and live in an unstable life if working at home for longer period or changing dwellings too often, I firmly believe that this modern way of work and life boost working efficiency and enrich people’s life experience.

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